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"Hello, face fungus.
Where does 'me' end, exactly,
and the mo begin?"

"I tickle your sense of self.
I prickle therefore I am."

(I hope you'll allow me one renga, given today's existential topic!)

Date: 2007-11-18 01:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] satimaflavell.livejournal.com
As I'm sure you Bob - er, Sean - the haiku should contain reference to one of the Three Marks of Existence: suffering, impermanence and no-self. You've done very nicely with no-self on this one and several of the earlier ones alluded to suffering. And I guess the mo is, in this case, intended to be impermanent. So well done!:-)

Date: 2007-11-18 10:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladnews.livejournal.com
Thanks! Expect a few odes to impermanence as the deadline approaches. :-)

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