As I'm sure you Bob - er, Sean - the haiku should contain reference to one of the Three Marks of Existence: suffering, impermanence and no-self. You've done very nicely with no-self on this one and several of the earlier ones alluded to suffering. And I guess the mo is, in this case, intended to be impermanent. So well done!:-)
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Date: 2007-11-18 01:35 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-11-18 10:23 pm (UTC)