Don 't want to bring the mood down, but I just read your story.
To be honest, I felt it dragged towards the middle. I wasn't sure whose POV it was, and I'm not convinced the character development was obvious enough.
Apart from that I liked it.
lol (Congrats, I *do* like it - just got to look up some of the bigger words now!)
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Date: 2011-04-03 12:22 am (UTC)Let's see - minimum $20., so $2.50 per word....
Can't wait to read it. Nope I can get through it in one sitting.
Steve Cameron
p.s. Now you only have to trim 25% from that story to equal Hemingway's six word story....
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Date: 2011-04-03 12:23 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-04-03 01:15 am (UTC)Probably not my best word-rate to date, but must be getting close.
A one-word story would be the ideal, but I suspect two words might be the absolute minimum. Something to ponder...
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Date: 2011-04-03 06:20 am (UTC)"Things You Can Do To Defend Yourself Against The Earth Getting Swallowed By A Black Hole"
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Date: 2011-04-04 06:08 am (UTC)lol
Steve Cameron
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Date: 2011-04-04 06:10 am (UTC)Don 't want to bring the mood down, but I just read your story.
To be honest, I felt it dragged towards the middle. I wasn't sure whose POV it was, and I'm not convinced the character development was obvious enough.
Apart from that I liked it.
lol (Congrats, I *do* like it - just got to look up some of the bigger words now!)
Steve Cameron
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Date: 2011-04-04 07:37 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-04-03 02:27 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-04-03 02:30 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-04-03 05:56 am (UTC)Steve Cameron
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Date: 2011-04-03 11:04 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-04-03 11:25 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-04-03 11:30 pm (UTC)But still...yikes. That's no good.
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Date: 2011-04-03 11:49 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-04-04 01:06 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-04-04 01:42 am (UTC)